Most Writers Think Suspense Means Action — They’re Dead Wrong.

You don’t need explosions or killers to keep your audience on edge. You need this 4-step suspense technique grounded in neuroscience and used by master storytellers.

My free PDF, The Psychological Presence Worksheet, walks you through a 4-part technique that turns any scene into a pressure cooker.  This PDF will show you how to to --

âś… Bury threats beneath the surface
✅ Give your audience information characters don’t have
✅ Strip away your hero’s power (slowly)
âś… Stretch time until it snaps

If you want to write scenes that make readers forget to breathe… This is how.

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Cover of the free screenwriting guide 'Will My Pilot Work?' by James A. Hurst, featuring a vintage TV and a 7-step pilot script test.

I’m James Hurst, a professional screenwriter with over 25 years of experience writing television pilots and episodic scripts for major networks and streamers.

I’ve written nearly 50 produced scripts for award-winning shows like Wynonna Earp, Hardy Boys, Being Erica, Flashpoint, and The Listener. My work has earned multiple nominations and awards, including two Canadian Screenwriting Awards and a Peabody Award.

Over the years, I’ve learned that suspense isn’t about explosions or car chases — it’s about psychology. It’s about what the audience knows, what they fear, and what the characters can’t see coming.

I created The Psychological Presence Worksheet to help screenwriters like you build unbearable tension in any scene — whether it's a high-stakes showdown or a quiet conversation over tea.

If you're looking to hook your readers, elevate your storytelling, and write scenes that grab and hold attention, this free worksheet will show you how.

Send Me My Suspense Worksheet